Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Writing

Last half term we were lucky enough to be able to borrow Mr Whitehurst’s GreenScreen.

We wrote Mrs Robb some letters trying to persuade her that a GreenScreen would be a useful piece of equipment to have in school.

Here are some of the phrases we used

…once we learn to use it was can teach the younger children and help improve their IT skills…

…if we have a GreenScreen Class Five will really impress you with the work they produce…

… we could use it to make films of us in different historical settings….

… we could write plays and draw scenery that would be used as the background when we were acting …

… it would help us improve our acting skills …

… It would be good use of money because we would get lots of use from it, not just this year but always …

… if we do get it we could teach the younger children to use it and eventually the whole school would know how to use this technology…

… I promise you, it will be one of the best decisions you ever make…

…. it would let us have a creative way of presenting work…

… we could use it in many different lessons ….

…. we would use it in a sensible manner ….

… we will let you have the first go …

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